Assignment 22: Elevator Pitch, Number 3
So everyone we actually have a pitch this week!
Going back to assignment 10 I made sure to look at the comments I got form that first pitch when I was trying to correct the comments that were made.
Many people asked about the types of products that would be made by the company, so I made sure to try and include some examples of what could be done.
I also receive comments on eye contact and body language. Hopefully I would out some of the eye contact issue but I am not completely sure. I know I defiantly did better this time. I tried to also add some body language, but I am not sure it really translated over.
I am using my laptop to film this as I have nothing else, and it happens to have a problem with the mic with is why I am seated. I didn't have a long enough pari of headphones. I did move out of my bedroom to record to hopefully making it more professional.
Thank guys and remember #productsforpreservation
https://youtu.be/5CCzSJd36mc
Going back to assignment 10 I made sure to look at the comments I got form that first pitch when I was trying to correct the comments that were made.
Many people asked about the types of products that would be made by the company, so I made sure to try and include some examples of what could be done.
I also receive comments on eye contact and body language. Hopefully I would out some of the eye contact issue but I am not completely sure. I know I defiantly did better this time. I tried to also add some body language, but I am not sure it really translated over.
I am using my laptop to film this as I have nothing else, and it happens to have a problem with the mic with is why I am seated. I didn't have a long enough pari of headphones. I did move out of my bedroom to record to hopefully making it more professional.
Thank guys and remember #productsforpreservation
https://youtu.be/5CCzSJd36mc
Hey Katie,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job being concise and staying on topic with your Elevator Pitch. It appeared thought out and that you definitely practiced it a few times. It seemed as though you had an evaluated concept, products, and plan. I had 2 suggestions that could help in the future. Suggestion 1 was to stand up because it will help you project your voice better and it forces you to think about your volume, energy, and tone. Suggestion 2 is to end your pitch with a call to action like, go support our environment by purchasing our products at.....