Assignment 10: Elevator Pitch, Number 1
Hey Everyone!
Sorry for the quality of the video I am trying fight off an illness at the moment so this is not the best. But hey we all know that if you don't work you dont' get payed and sadly I need the that promotion. Anyway thanks guys for tuning into my ted talk.
https://youtu.be/MqEFD-xGEns
Sorry for the quality of the video I am trying fight off an illness at the moment so this is not the best. But hey we all know that if you don't work you dont' get payed and sadly I need the that promotion. Anyway thanks guys for tuning into my ted talk.
https://youtu.be/MqEFD-xGEns
Hey Kaitie,
ReplyDeleteSo first of all thank you for the pitch. In general I really enjoyed listening to it. You have a very calm voice, talk slowly and with good pronunciation of important words. However it is important that you show a bit more body language. Moreover one point of improvement could be that it seemed like you were reading off the screen. Try to have eye contact with the audience.
Best,
Viet
Shalom Kaitie, no need to apologize for great work! I really like your idea as I haven't heard of anything like this before. I am wondering what type of home goods you will able to produce out of the remnants of invasive species. I would definitely support your company because of its cause, however. Overall, well done with your pitch; I especially like the Joker in the background :)
DeleteHi Kaitie,
ReplyDeleteNow that I have watched your video I understand better what your idea is. I am curious about what products you have in mind. I believe creating utensils is probably the most common product you could produce and sell. I liked how slow you talked in your elevator pitch and also how you tried to caught the audience's attention at the beginning.